Once there was a poor man. He had a girlfriend. She was very beautiful. And she was very rich.
One day, the poor man wanted to go out with his girlfriend. The poor man wanted to fetch his girlfriend, but he has no money to take a taxi. So he walked to her house.
On his way, the poor man saw a group of old men. There was a mountain of stones in the centre. One of the old man said that there was a bird inside the mountain of stones.
He took a stick from the ground and dig out the stones. He saw the bird lying on the ground. He picked the bird up and the old men clap their hands.
The poor man felt sad for the bird but he know he had done a good deed. This was his happiest day of his life!
The end.
(Written by Diana, 8 years old)
One day, the poor man wanted to go out with his girlfriend. The poor man wanted to fetch his girlfriend, but he has no money to take a taxi. So he walked to her house.
On his way, the poor man saw a group of old men. There was a mountain of stones in the centre. One of the old man said that there was a bird inside the mountain of stones.
He took a stick from the ground and dig out the stones. He saw the bird lying on the ground. He picked the bird up and the old men clap their hands.
The poor man felt sad for the bird but he know he had done a good deed. This was his happiest day of his life!
The end.
(Written by Diana, 8 years old)
posted by Lynn | You wanna say something?
8 Comments:
HI lynn...
baru skg I dpt cari ur blog...
alah u nampak I kat rumah shireen..
take care
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Sabrina A B, at Friday, May 19, 2006
wah *clap hands* Diana clever girl!! memula baca ingat mak die nye citer dongeng tadi...
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shsuya, at Friday, May 19, 2006
Hmmm .... actually if you analysed this story, the meaning is pretty deep you know. Nice!
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moby, at Friday, May 19, 2006
Hi Sab! Good to see you again! I'll drop by your blog pulak eh...
Suya, the story kan, very lari from the first few lines. Apa pulak seh citer pasal burung? Abih kan nak jumpa matair??? I'm more interested in the matair part. Haha.
ajab booboo, hi! I've seen you around but segan nak tegur (in other blogs). Maklum, i pemalu, you. Hahaha... Nice to meet you. Ah, the meaning? Yeah i guess there're lot of meanings in the story. About poor dating rich, about poor saving the bird. But apa motive seh citer ni???
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Lynn, at Friday, May 19, 2006
I did my facial at serangoon road (little India).
treading is not bad & also not dat painful..
the result is better than "cabut"
kalau u nak ur eyebrows looks natural.. "kajal" (dry eye brow pencil) gives good result
any u want to ask .. if u hv msn..
mine is magic_soda@hotmail.com
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Sabrina A B, at Friday, May 19, 2006
hmm...aku rasa topic citer lari giler siak...
first citer pasal dia miskin
dahtu citer pasal dia nyer matair
lepas tu citer pasal takda duit
abih tu kan... hahaha...sampai burung mati, tepuk tangan semua keluar! hahaha...kelakar siak!
aku suka budak budak gini nyer story! sure kalo aku, aku melayan menambah..cos they got kelebihan creativity cuma kita tak nampak jer...!
okaylah, aku pun jarang tag kau, pasal aku cari jugak comment kau, cock eyes tak perasan pat sini.
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suga, at Friday, May 19, 2006
For an 8 years old girl,the work is commendable although there is room for improvement. Let her keep on writing and I am sure she'll get better. Perhaps her weakness is to link the ideas that she is trying to express in her writing.
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Yara, at Saturday, May 20, 2006
i was actually... getting a bit too excited on how the story goes leh....
after the bird, what happened next?????????
actually, the beginning of the story was already good! i was so hoping to read the rest!!!
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Anonymous, at Sunday, May 21, 2006
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